Comments : Daymaker

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Simon
    Love brings out the beauty of our souls.
    As you have shown in your words.
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    What a dreamy light hearted piece!.. short and sweet and straight from the heart beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    The beauty of poetry stands out so much in your short, sweet verse.

    thank you for your comments on my work. being such a rare visitor to the site, your comment was like a booster to write more!

    peace and good luck
    shobhana

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Simon,

    What a sweet, little love poem you have made here! You are more than an athlete:)

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautifully captures the light that true love shines into a dreary world!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful! Short but sweet. I love the imagery and message. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I guess it doesn't take a lot of words just the right ones! beautiful and dreamy!