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by JustKristina   Apr 8, 2008


Shiny
Black
And silver
Cold
And threatening
Pull the trigger
And then
Your gone..
No more
Memories
No
More..
Tears
No more
All the problems
Fade away

Small
Round or oval
Harmless
Until now
Tilt your head
Pop um in
Waiting
Waiting..
Fading
Fading
Now no
More tears
No more
crying
All the problems
Fade away

Sharp
Shiny and light
Slicing
The pain away
Cut to deep?
Now you're going
Bleeding
Bleeding
Until no more
Left to give
Gone
Away
Now, no more
All the problems
Fade away

Close
your eyes beautiful
It's almost
time.
No more
problems
no more
pain
Let it all
slip away
Gone...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent

    I liked your style. it was very well describe. It was way too short but it was very clear. Beautiful, nice write.

    Keep it up
    Veamm

    Sorry for the delay

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Very intense and deep. Good write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Chilling...... If one wanna Jus to read this ....is interesting.... Reality bitez... Marvellous anyway

  • 16 years ago

    by Lance

    Wow... im speachless
    10/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lance

    Wow... im speachless
    10/5

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