This gave me the chillies. So descriptive. It was truly amazing. Good job.

Great. It almost sounded like a melody, so beautiful and dark.

Good job [5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarah A.

Wow, kris....it gave me ridiculous shivers down my spine...i wish...*bites lip*

Close
your eyes beautiful
It's almost
time.
No more
problems
no more
pain
Let it all
slip away
Gone...

^ an amazing end...leaves the reader breathless....gone....

great job, sweetie. tay told me you've been hurting..and i hope you are ok. smile, sweetie...you've still got lips to do so with. god bless..

Aww!!..really sad, i think it could've used a little more emotion in it, but that's just me..good job.
4/5
***aLy***

Kristina. i hope this wasn't written about u. b/c i have been having friend problems like this.. and i want u to know that iloveyou.<3 and don't do this to yourself. ur worth more than u think. and idk what i'd do w/o my big sis.

much much much love kristina.

mac.[the lil sis]

Wow... im speachless
10/5

Wow... im speachless
10/5

Chilling...... If one wanna Jus to read this ....is interesting.... Reality bitez... Marvellous anyway

Very intense and deep. Good write.

Excellent

I liked your style. it was very well describe. It was way too short but it was very clear. Beautiful, nice write.

Keep it up
Veamm

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