Moment

I love this

This is a lovely romantic poem. Well done. I like the stanza:

"We'll steal a moment,
from all the monsters,
we'll steal a moment,
to get things right. "

Great poem! So lovely and romantic especially the following stanza:

~We'll steal a moment,
from all the monsters,
we'll steal a moment,
to get things right~

Very unique. [5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarah A

Great poem! So lovely and romantic especially the following stanza:

~We'll steal a moment,
from all the monsters,
we'll steal a moment,
to get things right~

Very unique. [5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarah A

Another good poem! Rich with images. Suggestions:

you forgot the 'n' in moment on the first refrain thing! The only other thing I have to say is that on the last stanza, the last line seems a little forced, which is always annoying with rhyming lines, mine almost always have that problem (:P), but that's something to think about.

Otherwise, good job, I look forward to more!