I see now...

by MERCY is never shown   Apr 8, 2008


I see her now
through a crack in the door
the woman I've despised
now sitting in my place
i see her as
he throws her down
i see her as
he pulls her up
i see him as
his hand is filled with her hair
i see now this is
my cross to bear
tears flood
tears of pain
I'm feeling for her
and it's not hate

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I kind of wish this was longer and had more detail and imagery. It was short and sweet but I felt this topic needed more for the reader. The great thing is you've definately gotten better as a writer over time and thats the main goal. I know you'll appreciate honest votes so this to is a 4/5 nicely done

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