Am I making sense?

by JAZMIN   Apr 8, 2008


Does it hurt to look at them,
when the look you give them is not the same as they give to you.

Does it hurt to smile
when the reason you smile is not the reason that is really making you smile

Am i making any sense?

Does it hurt when you hug them,
and they don't hug like the way it used to be.

Does it hurt to see them having fun,
and you on the inside are dying for their attention.

Am i making any sense?

Does it hurt to love them so much
when you know they didn't love you back?

Does it hurt to turn your head and look back at them,
and they don't even notice that you are looking at the person, that tore them apart.

The person that brought their world crashing down
and made everything better but now everything is not what it used to be....

Am I making sense?

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    All the words upside down and thinking how sad can be without blaming one of the others and you really pure the words amazing. u did absolutely good on this!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    That was amazing. I can't describe it. I felt music in my heart while reading this, it makes a lot of sense to me. :) Great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Freedom

    Its sad poem,i can read sadness through ur lines.but anyway i enjoyed it :)

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