Great write!
When I first read it in math, I was super focused on your writing that I totally didn't pick up a lot of what was in it! It's way good!
I love the imagery of what a man would be like without a heart. It's a lot like in the stories of the common, cold-hearted, old man.
It made me feel bad for the people like that, though. and it made me feel so thankful that I'm NOT like that!
Over all: Excellent.

Very inspiring ^^

good job

I think it would be a good thing id you slpi this into paragraph .

read this big paragraph make the eye afraid no maater how much teh subject is good

hope it be ok

This poem is a very nice piece indeed. The whole poem was rhymed instead of the last line which made it emphesized. I liked the idea as well, a life with no love doesn't worth living. The whole poem was great, liked to read and comment 5/5

Wow that was interesting..and i no a man with out a heart its my dad but ya ne way i can relate

This one stood out to me...It has alot of meaning...I think its one of your best ones..very good