Divorce (Have a nice life)

by Freedom   Apr 8, 2008


I dont know what to say
And even what to do.
The feelings between us became so untruth.
We smile no more,we talk no more
we dont do the things we adore
The silence hit us with its cold fingers
Calm between us became too linger.

I feel we should start to give up
But please babe dont blame me.
Look into your heart,you dont love me,you see?
You just get used to me
That's why you still wanna be

In this cold room,last time
I will whisper to your ear how much i love you
Then i will walk.Please dont turn around.
I am not going to look back.
I must be on another track

And when I sit alone I will wonder why?
why we couldn't try?I cry.
I know its really hard to do
but babe,we have nothing left to prove.

(Why?why have you changed?)

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(sad) Freedom (C) 2008-04-08

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  • 15 years ago

    by Second to None

    I thought it was very well written. and with good feeling. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Sad and True? nice write xP

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Aww dear "hugs" am sorry to hear that. i hope it didn't end like this. you both should try to talk about it again if you don't want to lose each other.

    as for poem, it had deep feelings and sad ones i like it though because it has true feelings and i can imagine the pain

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Hm very interesting, but i still really like it.
    Good job! :)

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