Ahh just loved the ending ... I couldnt help but laugh because some guys are just that dumb to let a good thing slip away .. eh who needs them away loll. I loved the strength in your words because it made me believe what you said. The scenes you created with your flawless choice of words perfectly fit exactly what you wanted to say. Sometimes we have these thoughts and feelings in our heads but we dont know how to put them into words .. well my dear you are talented with the gift to greatly affect those who read your poetry.

"It is time I stand on my own two feet , rather than trying to continue this balancing act we have oh so horribly mastered"
^Very unique way to describe the situation. Loved it and your pulled it off.

Well done *5/5*

I really liked this poem, the way you hint at what was going on, but never fully say makes it easy for other people to identify with. But you describe your hurt feelings to a 'T'. The ending was fabulous, it definatlely shows how some people completly unaware of what they have until it's gone. Great poem 5/5

I scanned over a few poems, before i even started to comment. all i had to say its woah! you have a unique style which i have never come across in on this site before, its a modern twist to freestyle, that catchs the eye, with the typing as well as the simple lanugage.#

1st stanza: you said it so blunt, that it felt like something that everyone can connect to. the first line, simply drew me in. do me a favour, never ever change your style its amazing.

2nd stanza.you can feel the emotion, a mix of 'ha in your face' and 'i'm not falling for this anymore.'its a strong strong stanza, i like the way you threw in the 'sweetheart' and 'pretty little head' it gives a very realistic flare to it.

3rd stanza: brings the poem, to a fantastic close. you can almost hear you speak these words, to someone you onced loved untilo they changed.

the last line on its own also works rather well,its a smack up the jaw for whoever you are writing for.

normally i would tell someone to structure there poem better, but for you personally this style just works.

bravo. 5/5 xxx