Comments : Lacerated Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Wow, I absolutely loved this. The images you created were so powerful. The pain so vivid as was the determination to not be metally beaten.

    My favourite stanza, the last -

    Bring the thread to stitch the hole,
    My shattered heart needs a soul,
    It has been this way for so long,
    Lacerated, make me strong.

    Well done 5/5 plus nominated (good luck)

    Michael