Goddamn these Silent Lives

After reading "Resonance" I felt compelled to investigate your work further. This poem is much more "my cup of tea". As I read it for a second time I see a cityscape of bourgeois capitalism set against feelings of regret and dissonance.

This may not be what you intended at all. And for that, it is all the better. A highly enjoyable read.

Such strong emotion and vivid a creation of your feelings in this piece. your words literally scream at the reader, very good write.