Comments : Goddamn these Silent Lives

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Such strong emotion and vivid a creation of your feelings in this piece. your words literally scream at the reader, very good write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    After reading "Resonance" I felt compelled to investigate your work further. This poem is much more "my cup of tea". As I read it for a second time I see a cityscape of bourgeois capitalism set against feelings of regret and dissonance.

    This may not be what you intended at all. And for that, it is all the better. A highly enjoyable read.