We fear to be happy. we fear of many things. to fall in love. but it's a journey we fall dwn we stand up for us to live. we fall again we stand up. life has up n dwn. and so does loving someone. whoa.. i work things tht totally dnt relate to this poem i think... idk. im lost.. well u writen it nicely. hehe. nive job.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Fears of Joy, lol. funny, but this poem is still great none the less. 5/5 in my book.
PoetryKnight
aka
Aaron