Great job jesse..again. it's always a great job...i need to think of a better description...good job doesn't cover it any more.

Dear Reader, hearts can be broken
Long before they're dead
Cold bullet screaming white noise
Last thought through her head

^ my favorite stanza...very relatable.

amazing job.

Wow, i can relate. broken hearts hurt but wen it's caused my non-returning of love...it kills. it's like everyday is meaningless cause u know that no matter how hard u try...they just wont love u back. but if u take it 1 day at a time...someday u'll get ur happy ending. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

Aww!...really sad!1..grea job!..lots of great emotion put into this!
Aly