Drown Me

by Ariana Mejia   Apr 9, 2008


Sitting here drowning away,
just suppressed by all my pain.
not realizing wrong from right,
just not knowing how to deal with this life.
Smile in the day cut at night,
just filled with so much fright.
so sick of people telling me what to do
I'm gonna do what i want to.
people don't know me they never will,
they don't know how i feel
i say one thing but mean another,
just bad thoughts are hard to cover.
depressed by the simplest things
then everyone thinks I'm mean

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    A sad one but very well written. Keep up

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Hole poem 1 paragraph make the reader scare of reading,

    i hope you fix that , adn the rhyming not much organised i hope i read more good one in future

  • 16 years ago

    by Lacie

    Pain, It's hard to get through, YOu feel like no ones there and no one will ever be,
    YOU think mabe tomorrow will be better, but it never is. The wish of tomorrow and it not being better only makes u never want to hope again, becasue you know it can't come true, so you give up all together, ONly more pain the fill the void of broken hopes and dreams.

    nice job

    [~lacie~] 5/5