Beautifully penned piece. Good word choice, flow and vivid imagery! Excellent job!

Excellent piece of work and very impressive.
great poem :)

Its been too long Tom.

Beautifully written and expressed, your choice of words were in such a rythmic procession, made it a easy and really enjoyable read!

I hope all is well Tom and lookf forward to reading your work and hearing from You.

Take care

- Thuggy

Its been too long Tom.

Beautifully written and expressed, your choice of words were in such a rythmic procession, made it a easy and really enjoyable read!

I hope all is well Tom and lookf forward to reading your work and hearing from You.

Take care

- Thuggy

Wow such a great heartbreaking poem... Beautifully penned piece .... 5/5 keep it up

The emotion in this wonderful, i enjoyed the poem very much. i love the third stanza especially. 5/5

This is a really deep and heartfelt poem. I can feel this emotions and it brought back memories of my ex. Very well written and this evokes lots of emotions.

I really like this poem...for I can relate to it and I am sure many can as its hard to forget someone you have loved.

Powerful, i love your work, i get lost in each of your poems, i can feel the emotions you express. 5/5 xx