Comments : Them

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    AH! I know how you feel! That hit it perfectly! I honestly felt that one deep down. I love how simple it was, but yet how full of feeling it was.
    It all flowed so nicely, and there werent any rocky patches! great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Why do you hate me?
    why do you ignore me,
    push me away when you're
    with them?
    ^^^
    To be ignored is one of the most hurtful things. To hold us close when alone then push us away while in the presence of others hurts not only our hearts but .... our spirit as well

    We soared over worlds,
    to adventures untold,
    where no one could
    hold us back.
    ^^^^
    This stanza speaks of the beautiful memories ... and to have them crushed is heartbreaking

    Now your gone,
    leaving me alone
    to find my way
    once you met
    them.
    ^^^
    Gosh I remember the times so well when a friend (well one I thought was a friend) would get swept away by a new boyfriend and our friendship dwindled.
    Such heartbreak your words echo.

    Thank you for your comment and welcome to P&Q ... hope you enjoy the site. If you need anything feel free to ask
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    This a meaningful poem....Yet again simple...good job