Thinking of you

by Nathanilliam   Apr 9, 2008


The sun rises
the fog lifts
the bell rings
the teacher speaks
the class leaves
schools out
work starts
I go home
the sun sets
lights out

I'm still thinking
of you

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  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    I really really liked this! It was short and sweet but it said a lot. It gave me little goose bumps.lol I am sure a lot of people can relate to this! GREAT WORK!
    ~Kayla

  • 16 years ago

    by FiguringThisOutAsIGo

    That was so amazing! so sweet, adorable, and it just FORCES you to smile! gr8 job!
    <3
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tears of steal

    Like what shinobi said ^^you showed the rush of your day but somehow you still had time to think about what is important to you i like it its short and sweet good job 5/5

    *annak*

  • 16 years ago

    by L3AH

    Awww this was so cute! i loved it, short but really meaningful!

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    Its kind of simple...Maybe you could have added a little more to it? But good job anyways

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