Aw that was way cute! And you said you can't write love poems! That was sweet! I was confused for a second, but then I read the last part, it made sense! That really was the cutest thing ever! It's so sweet, so sincere, so simple! I love it! Great job!

Awwww i love this poem!!
it's so pretty!
<3

Aww!!..its really reaaly short. but really really sweet!!!...totaly love it!...great job!
Aly

Short and simple
but very sweet
i loved it
:]
5/5

THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! a mix of genre detail and a little bit of romance and love... BRILLIANT! (ps, this is Brandy)

Short, Simple, Sweet and Effective

5-5!

Dani
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You tried to show the rush in every day life, but in this rush you still find yourself thinking of your loved one. I liked the idea and the fact that this poem was short gave a fast meaning to all actions. There weren't any rhymes, but in such a short poem it would be expected. Nice work 5/5

Its kind of simple...Maybe you could have added a little more to it? But good job anyways

Awww this was so cute! i loved it, short but really meaningful!

Like what shinobi said ^^you showed the rush of your day but somehow you still had time to think about what is important to you i like it its short and sweet good job 5/5

*annak*

That was so amazing! so sweet, adorable, and it just FORCES you to smile! gr8 job!
<3
5/5

I really really liked this! It was short and sweet but it said a lot. It gave me little goose bumps.lol I am sure a lot of people can relate to this! GREAT WORK!
~Kayla