Those brown eyes

by Alex   Apr 9, 2008


Let me be the one to save you,
The one to make you smile and laugh.
Ill do anything you want me to,
Just say the word and ill be there.
Your brown eyes paralyze me,
They make my heart beat faster.
They make me stop breathing.
It feels absolutely amazing,
The way you look at me,
Its like you looking straight into my soul.
Like my appearance isn't the only thing you see.
You make me go weak to the knees.
And my breathing gets shallow.
Its unbelievable the way you make me feel,
Its just the one of my many battles,
The only battle i ever intend to lose.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I dont get the whole battle part. what battle are you talking about?
    i like the poems feeling and meaning but it lacks structure. i feel it needs to be refined a little.but it is still a great poem and i give it a 4.