Meadows of Heaven

by Shinobi   Apr 9, 2008


Softness of your heart reveals kindness with no name
Thoughts of your mind show compassion like no other
Feelings and emotions will always stay the same
Sealed for the longest years, awaiting the touch of another

Painful moments shatter as a broken image reaching ground
Suffering events torn apart before divine feelings below
Heart beat fastened and mind addicted to the same old sound
While thinking of the same old feelings I used to know

Vibrant rivers of passion rise from dry fissured land
Trees and flowers grow from beneath, under cloudless skies
Those marvelous meadows of heaven grew from dry sand
Amazing creation lays in front, banishing sorrow and lies

Relations from all sides support this flourishing place
Bonds with dearest friends will never be left behind
When lost in endless deserts I follow the trace
Invisible path I can follow with heart and mind combined

Single red rose for a passion that will never fade
Single white one to show friendship never dies
Black rose for pain and sorrow now dwell in the shade
Loving heart beats again following those deep brown eyes

Pleasant feelings of happy heart remain
Thankful soul for friends standing near by
Supporting those meadows of heaven with blessing rain
Sweet smile can't thank enough those angels flying high

As I raise my head and look up at the rainbow above
Smiling at the dawn of a brand new day
Thankful for those whom I know and love
In those meadows of heaven I aspire to stay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mason

    Wow.

    i love the imagery, all the pictures painted in my head were amazing, good job

  • 16 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I really liked this poem a lot. The flow and rhymes went together really well and i thought you had a good word choice. I could feel the emotions running through it. Really good. 5/5

    Caitlin =]

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    This is kind of inspirational...really takes the rough edge off of life's outlook. The title is perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    That was an amazing poem.
    Great stanzas flow
    your words very unique
    i simply loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Beautiful rivers of passion rise from dry fissured land
    Trees and flowers grow from beneath, under cloudless skies
    Those beautiful meadows of heaven grew from dry sand
    Amazing creation lays in front, banishing sorrow and lies

    this stanza needs some work but you know what its my favorite stanza of all just that i didnt like the fact you used beautiful in both the lines it just.. didnt draw image you can do better, loved it, deep meaning behind it all

    loved the ending and the beginning got me caught up in all of it a peaceful write for me brilliant.

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