As I raise my head and look up at the rainbow above
Smiling at the dawn of a brand new day
Thankful for those whom I know and love
In those meadows of heaven I aspire to stay

This staza is my favorite and it brings the entie poem togather, the flow was great, the emotion subtle but strong, and the word choice was indeed brillant and vivid, Well done, i can see no room for improvement 5/5

Beautiful rivers of passion rise from dry fissured land
Trees and flowers grow from beneath, under cloudless skies
Those beautiful meadows of heaven grew from dry sand
Amazing creation lays in front, banishing sorrow and lies

this stanza needs some work but you know what its my favorite stanza of all just that i didnt like the fact you used beautiful in both the lines it just.. didnt draw image you can do better, loved it, deep meaning behind it all

loved the ending and the beginning got me caught up in all of it a peaceful write for me brilliant.

That was an amazing poem.
Great stanzas flow
your words very unique
i simply loved it 5/5

This is kind of inspirational...really takes the rough edge off of life's outlook. The title is perfect

I really liked this poem a lot. The flow and rhymes went together really well and i thought you had a good word choice. I could feel the emotions running through it. Really good. 5/5

Caitlin =]

Wow.

i love the imagery, all the pictures painted in my head were amazing, good job