Just Like Everybody Else

by shadow   Apr 9, 2008


A million other people stand in this very line
Feeling the exact same emotions I did each time
Write a presciption and then go out the back door
Curing only the problems of today, not from before

They tell me I'm not alone in this pain I feel
But can they tell if what I am feeling is truly real?
It feels like I'm walking in an endless dream
Where only in the darkest part of my mind can I scream

I speak of demons that haunt me every night
You know the kind too strong to ever fight
They choke you with memories of past pains
Until you cannot stand to live another day again

The worst part of this situation we are in
Is the people we love just get hurt in the end
As if the moment you talk it comes out another way
Like someone has taken over whatever you say

So like a fool you can only stand and watch it fall apart
Praying for a just one more chance to get a fresh start
But as you should know, life is too cruel and unfair
And likes to laugh as you die inside your own despair

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  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    Great expression Kace. :) 5/5 Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    Great expression Kace. :) 5/5 Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    WOW! I really really liked this poem. It was magnificent. It really cuaght my heart, I had to keep reading.

    They tell me I'm not alone in this pain I feel
    But can they tell if what I am feeling is truly real?
    It feels like I'm walking in an endless dream
    Where only in the darkest part of my mind can I scream

    ^^^this was my favorite stanza. You have A LOT of talent as a poet. Please keep writing and check out some of my work. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by Erin

    First off this is effing amazingg and secound off thats how i feel....well writtten well put together felt like you were inside my braind love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Maddyxxx

    Well Written! :) I really love this one, I could feel the emotion. 5/5 Keep it up. (my post True Love is from a vid I seen on myspace)

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