Well Written! :) I really love this one, I could feel the emotion. 5/5 Keep it up. (my post True Love is from a vid I seen on myspace)

First off this is effing amazingg and secound off thats how i feel....well writtten well put together felt like you were inside my braind love it 5/5

WOW! I really really liked this poem. It was magnificent. It really cuaght my heart, I had to keep reading.

They tell me I'm not alone in this pain I feel
But can they tell if what I am feeling is truly real?
It feels like I'm walking in an endless dream
Where only in the darkest part of my mind can I scream

^^^this was my favorite stanza. You have A LOT of talent as a poet. Please keep writing and check out some of my work. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Great expression Kace. :) 5/5 Great job.

Great expression Kace. :) 5/5 Great job.