Rainy fuzzy day

by Goodbye   Apr 9, 2008


Another day like today
puddles are growing on the ground
sky is fuzzy and Grey and people are
running without umbrellas
It is a cold rainy morning
and I left my window open
Could anyone tell me where you went?
I am missing you here with me now..

All the children love to play in puddles
and their mothers and nannies tell them to not
I am walking forward with galoshes on my feet
White seagulls are flying above me
It took so long to get up
Last night was so cold
You never planned to stay with me,
you should have told me..

I tried so hard to make you love me
I used all the energy in my little heart
I start running, mud defiles my hems
Grass is smooth I nearly fall down
I slow down, traffic lights turn to red
And all my salty tears are mixed
with the raindrops and nobody knows
how much you have hurt me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    I used all the energy in my little heart
    ^^
    this was adorable,made me teary...my favourite part...wonderful poem...I love it 5/5

    Take care..
    Isha

  • 16 years ago

    by Happy without a reason

    I love this one...

    my favorite

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    What an amazing poem-the imagery, the feelings, I mean the way you used the children, and the mud, and mixed it in with your words...amazing! Great job.
    Also: 'plan' should be 'planned' in the second stanza. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This such a powerful piece of work. I absolutely love the way you describe you describe your emotions, likenn them to a stormy day..puddles, rain, blustering wind, even the children, like your little broken heart. Fighting with your unbrella - the frustration of broken love.

    I really love this piece. It is wonderful!

    I am sorry I haven't prepared a better comment for you.

    My favourite stanza is the first one, but really, they are all good!!!
    Another day like today
    puddles are growing on the ground
    sky is fuzzy and Grey and people are
    running without umbrellas
    It is a cold rainy morning
    and I left my window open
    Could anyone tell me where you went?
    I am missing you here with me now..

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    RAIN.. hEARD ALL LOVERS LOVE RAIN. mARVELLOUS THEME

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