My land

by Ingrid   Apr 9, 2008


My land

It's once fertile ground
now lies bare
Severe storms blew away
the seeds
before they could sprout
Thereafter endless rains
washed them away.

One tiny seed refused
to surrender
to the elements and
transformed into
a beautiful tree with a
firm trunk and big branches.

It no longer needs
my loving care
to stay alive
It knows how
to survive and endure
even the heaviest of storms
and the biggest of floods
because I taught it how.

And as I stand there
admiring my creation
with the afternoon sun
warming my back
I can hear my Maker
call me.

It was not until then
I realized
how much I longed
to return to his green pastures
and walk amidst the flowers
in his garden of paradise.

And as I cross the threshold
I can almost smell the roses.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Strong words....Good example about the island that everyone is....great workd...

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyn

    I think this may have been written about your son. What a beautiful poem and how wonderful you heard God call you and knew you were coming home. This will be in my favourite poems. I too have a lovely son who is like a tall oak and when read your poem think of him. Thank you

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    This shows how passionate you are about nature and your possessions i loved the wording and you described your love for your land as a relationship
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Stunning... wonderful.. such a beautiful write. I'm not sure why I haven't read this one yet, it's breathtaking. 5/5