I love the shortness of the poem. It is damn cute! Your word choice is perfect giving the piece worth. my favorite lines are:

"I tucked the sun in
kissing it with motherly affection"

^^

This is the kind of poetry I want to write! you pulled it off with soo much class and style! really well done!

This is what I call "beautiful". You are amazing, girl. I love you!!! XXX

This is what I call "beautiful". You are amazing, girl. I love you!!! XXX