Comments : Time is Following

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    So much depth in this poem, it's really goood! what happened? suddenly you've turned into a shakespear-class poet! you rock!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "Time is following us around,
    unrelenting

    I sit here and wait
    for what, I don't know
    for you? for me? for what?
    I put my head in my hands"

    This is my favourite stanza.

    I don't want to repeat myself but I just say: YOU ARE AMAZING..

    I can relate to this poem...I really feel what is to be there...waiting...thinking.... Beautifully expressed feelings...WoW.