My Heart

by JUSTiNA   Apr 9, 2008


Something so fragile,
So breakable
I gave it to every guy I loved
And they did, the unmistakeable--

They broke it,
Like it was trash
So I never had a boy
To truly like me, and at last--

I met "him" and gave him my heart
And maybe it was too soon
I mean he could've done so much damage
But i loved him, what else could i do?

So he took it
As fragile as it could be
I was expecting it to break soon
and for me to start crying

But it didn't happen that way
He hasn't broken it--at least not yet
But i know inside of me,
I'll never forget the day we met

We're still together
But so far away
And sometimes I wonder
if his love for me will stay

We're miles, no-
countries apart!!
So I must be stupid, right?
Surely our love will fall apart!

But I have so much faith in him
He's not like other boys I've met
And I am definetly hoping
That he has my heart safetly kept

Sometmes I wonder,
Is this love strong enough to hold?
I love him so much
So I sure hope so!

One thing I do know
Even though we're very far apart
Regardless what happens in the end,
He will always have my heart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    First of all, thank you for reading my poem. :)

    Love poems always interests me and baffles me at the same time. At the same time, I regard love poems the hardest to write simply because it is so hard to be...original. Many poems I've read talk about things the same way and it becomes old. Also love poems are better unrhymed in order to make the emotions flow freely.

    The emotions in your poem are powerful and raw. But to transfer those emotions unto paper into a good poem is the hard part. Some use too much details and become confusing. Though your poem is clear and easy to read and to relate to, it lacks poetic sensory.

    Here's an example:
    Something so fragile,
    So breakable...
    A heart is like a wandering cub
    Sacrificed to men for love.

    Yet their ungrateful nature
    Held my heart like trash-
    Threw it into the angry waves
    To die and drown of sorrow.

    Then he rose from the raging waters
    And captured my heart.
    So beautiful and truly dangerous
    Too soon yet I loved him.

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