Comments : My heart is not a dance floor

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is really nice, well thought of and nicely put in words. Love the flow and the rhymes too. Good work keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Good one :)
    i liek the flow of words, like a beat , jsut mind the paragraphs and the rhyming is not so perfect!!
    :)

    hope this one is a winner , visit the discusion board soon to know !