Okay hun this poem was good but you made an error or two, I managed to remember one of them so here it is....Why (cnat)-->(should be can't) they jus go up

but I liked this poem, a lot of meaning in it. Just keep up the good work hun!

I really like the ryming at the begining
ummm im not shure if u like shortend some words on purpose but i could read it so it was ok
5/5 keep it up =]

I like this poem it sounds just like my college lol this is really good