I love it :]
Its really breathtaking and you paint the picture really well.
5/5

Wonderful write. Truly amazing. Great job.

I didn ' t intend on you finding out how much I love it -0 written from a true teenage romantic, i must say :]

'All of the dreams , plans , and promises are wasted --
Maybe walking away will be easier , for the both of us' .- how i have felt like that one or twice to many times.

you write like you think anad that what makes you an extremely unique and its what i love about your writing.