This was a great poem! it was deep and beautiful. you have a unique writing style that kind of reminds me of my own.

This pressure took away everything, so here yet again I lay empty
Making my heart as cold to the world surrounding me
For now I am back to the start where it all began
Searching in myself, for a better path again

that stanza really stuck out to me. it was wisely worded and very expressive. a lovely piece of work. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.