Edit:
This line, Loves kiss a romantic interruption
I think it may need an apostrophe S after loves, seeing how it is loves kiss, showing ownership. Just like you did for life's concerns.
I think it should be heart's treasure, while we're on the subject.

Response:
That was pretty kick ass. I can tell you worked very hard on it. The flow is flawless, you rhymed perfectly. The title is intriguing and you stuck to the subject rather nicely.

Rating:
This is a five for sure. This is why you're on my favorites. Many other people on this site (the younger generation) have far too many mistakes and their vocabulary makes it less appealing. It makes me want to whip out the scrabble board and teach them!

Wow.. Great Poem!!.. Amazing.. great flow.. and very deep.. I liked it!!.. keep it up!!