WOW!! Very powerful. I really liked it. I've never felt that way over a boy but I can relate to wanting to use the knife. Good job!

Hey, dont end your life over some guy, yes you loved him or maybe even still do, but its not worth dying over, there will be others i promise, please i dont know you, but i beg you not to end it this way

Oh why is that goobyes should ever come...? Marvellous write

I love this!!! It has alot of emotion in it. ik i felt that way about someone...love it love it love it..lol

Ew

Lol jm that was really good!!!!

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5/5

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! holy crow that was freaking awesome!!!!! i know how you feel. that was a strong poem and i hit me hard. ~KM~ oh and i forgot to say 100/5