Haha enjoyed every bit of it mike, the flow was marvelous and the rhyming was natural, thanks for the comment, and keep writing.

Its a great poem sorta made me laugh though,

lol love this stanza in a weird way

Perverse little Cherub I cannot avoid
Blindfolded by love I become annoyed
Your helmet is cute its war you say
The next person I meet? What if they're gay?

I loved it. and i enjoyed it very very much. keep up the great work:)

I love this poem. it was really funny but sweet

This is great! It was very well written and original! Keep it up, you're very talented. :)
5/5

Love
Tina