Okay overall the poem was pretty good
and it's cool to know we have a lot of the same intrests
music (ect.)
There were only a few errors i noticed
I'm not sure if you were trying to rhyme but
a lot of the time you did so here are your rhyming errors:
Cobain(<3)--fame
novels---shelves
tricks---feet
face---says
I really liked how short and sweet this was
lovely write
5/5

This is a cute poem. I like how it was short and to the point. Very unique style, I've got to say. I'm not sure if you were trying to rhyme but if you were there were a few errors:
Cobain/fame
Novels/shelves
Tricks/feet
Face/says
If you want your poem to rhyme, all of the stanzas should follow the pattern but if it is not meant to rhyme, make sure none of the stanzas rhyme in the same pattern. i.e.:
Kung fu
Jackie Chan
Fighting scenes
Learn Iron hand

I like to draw
Paint venues
Colour combination
Make art from hues

You started out your poem with these lines so I thought maybe the whole poem would rhyme in that pattern. Try putting the rhyming stanzas further in the poem and not one after another because it is very misleading. Other than that (sorry if it was harsh) I really like this poem. 5/5

I liked this poem.. but ((haha.. here it comes)) i didn't like how the flow was way off and it sometimes rhymed, and other times it didn't. I think that you should work on that. Its a great start for an amazing poem! witha little bit of work, it could be fantabulous! Keep up the great work! and keep on writing! you have a great start! :]

The obious thing by now is that some of it rhymed and some of it didn't. This made the flow pretty rocky, but other than that you used excellent word choices, and I like your style. Try stepping up your vocabulary a bit, to add power to your read, and wait a couple of days after you write your poem and reread it outloud it is easier to spot the flow errors that way. 4/5