The way you look at her

by Kaila   Apr 10, 2008


Why do I feel this way for you, if you don't even care?
Too busy staring upon her beauty so elegant and alive,
What am I too you but a friend and a companion?
Too be the one you laugh and hold is something I always strive.

I want to be the girl that lies so softly in your arms,
The one that strokes your silky hair as we lye in stillness,
You could hold me in your arms so close, so everything is fine,
I want to be the girl that you bring soup to when I have an illness.

Why do I get an aching churning in my stomach when you arrive?
The beating of my heart echoes throughout my still frame,
When you touch her in the way I picture us I feel numb and alone,
Watching you smile with her, I feel this rapid feeling of lame.

I could be that girl that kisses your lips so soft; it shakes your nerves,
The one that makes you shiver when you see me coming near,
I could be the one that sneaks behind you and makes you smile.
The one that makes you wish that I were here.

Although you have this girl, and she is the air that you breathe,
Please Mike don't forget me, my heart will never leave this home,
If you have doubts, on these feelings that I hold,
Just search for this paper, and glance along this poem.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I could feel the emotion of this piece. You know the title portrayed thoughts into my mind which I didn't want to think about. It had me wondering about certain things.

    I found the ache of this poem to really touch my heart, though again I didn't like the word "lame" within it. It just didn't go together for me. This was a powerful piece which I did enjoy reading as it expressed so much dearly.

    Overall I enjoyed it. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I can feel the emotion behind the words "I want to be the girl that lies so softly in your arms,
    The one that strokes your silky hair as we lye in stillness,
    You could hold me in your arms so close, so everything is fine,
    I want to be the girl that you bring soup to when I have an illness."

    i love the way you project an image into the readers mind and can keep their attention easily.

    great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Very power and very strong. I could feel the deep passions you described because Ive felt them before. You described the desire to have some so flawlessly and I could clearly understand the meaning throughout the piece. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara Sutton

    Aw i think you should give it to him=]

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is beautiful!!!!!!!!! This is how I feel about another boy at my school!

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