Furious

by Ares   Apr 10, 2008


Are you satisfied,
you stuck me at square one,
you'll just bring me down,
but Christ I'm your own son.

teach me again,
and I'll swear this is the end,
I'll make you pay and justify,
it's my life - so get a grip!

you don't know for sure,
maybe I'm the exception,
you had your shot,
you chose to post-pone our extinction.

teach me again,
and I'll swear this is the end,
I'll make you pay and justify,
it's my life - so get a grip!

I want it so bad,
just think of the memories,
I'll give you the life,
you know you will die for.

let me dream,
and I swear it's gonna be,
a brand new world for all of us,
please don't break my ideas.

teach me again,
and I'll swear this is the end,
I'll make you pay and justify,
it's my life - so get a grip!

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  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent oem from an excellent HOTTTIE of a poet

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love sometimes i feel the same way with my mom soo im here for u great poem...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    You sound really angry in this--and putting emotions into your writing is what makes it good, so fantastic job. It kind of seemed like you were losing the anger towards the end, so be careful not to lose your steam when you're doing so good! But a fantastic job..can't wait for more!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    My favourite stanza:
    "teach me again,
    and I'll swear this is the end,
    I'll make you pay and justify,
    it's my life - so get a grip!"

    Nice expression of feelings of our lovely poet. :)

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