by Prasad Baadkar Apr 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
What would you do...? |
by Biya
Yeah This was such a nice piece of writing ! I was just picturizing all what the poem says :) ..Infact , this is the poem which is when read , brings a scene at the front of reader ! |
LOVE SOMETIMES HAPPENS IN ANOTHER WORLD BUT THE WORLD WHERE U LIVE ACTUALLY , IT DOES INT. YOU JUST CANT HELP BUT CRY WHEN U FIND OUT THAT U ARE A VICITIM OF LOVING SOMEONE U NEVER KNEW EXIST OR NOT. |
by yaneris
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.ayyyyyyyyyyyyy.que lindo,i love it lol.... |
by ali
This is such a sweet poem and it had the potential to be truly awesome but i spose the harshness of the ending is just reality hitting. but the bulk of it is just so beautiful and th eimagery is amazing, a really really good piece! 5/5 |
Ur poem rocks but really I am shocked bcoz of the end..but at the same time it is pretty cool..nice work..keep it up 5/5.. |