Life is Bliss

by Bekka Smekka   Apr 10, 2008


Maybe life is
just a game.
A game that
makes you go insane.

A game with love
a game with death.
A game thats starts
when you take a breath.

It makes you laugh,
it makes you cry.
It hides the truth
within a lie.

But when you see
you will know this.
If i'm with you
than life is bliss.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pixxie Rebel

    I loved this poem, and I agree, life seems like a game, it just doesn't play fair.

    The flow of this was great, it read with ease, and I really enjoyed it.

    Pixxie

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Life is surely not a game. Why? Well, because with games tou have rules and enter it freely. Life on the other hand is thrust upon us and with rules that no one quite understands, or indeed have any desire to adhere to.

    Well done on this write. I enjoyed how it read off the screen with ease. The message quite simple this: 'Love' Does a soul require anything more? Well, that is another poem, isn't it?

    Keep up the good work.

    Michael