Life is surely not a game. Why? Well, because with games tou have rules and enter it freely. Life on the other hand is thrust upon us and with rules that no one quite understands, or indeed have any desire to adhere to.

Well done on this write. I enjoyed how it read off the screen with ease. The message quite simple this: 'Love' Does a soul require anything more? Well, that is another poem, isn't it?

Keep up the good work.

Michael

I loved this poem, and I agree, life seems like a game, it just doesn't play fair.

The flow of this was great, it read with ease, and I really enjoyed it.

Pixxie