Brilliant idea and I really enjoyed reading it. I could relate to the vodka verse too xxx

This was amazing...the story and the rhyme...it was all just great. the story made me think of an adults story in a child's voice...i dunno if that makes any sense but....keep it up lol
5/5
x!x

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
i really loved the flow in it
5/5

I LOVE it.
i dunno y but its just realli awesome
ur a realli great writer n i wuld like feedback
from u if u have the time.
xx

I think its very well writen :) i enjoyed reading this and im glad its fiction :)

What a poem. the way it sounds like a childrens verse but mixed with troubles of adolescence and above and how we deal with it brings a shiver down my spine but a good one. well done chick 5/5 xx

Idea is good. innovative concept. Really nice to read. Well written.