Love Pulled the Trigger

by LoverandHater   Apr 10, 2008


Rip me open slowly,
You like to hear me shout,
Sit back and baby,
Watch my blood flow out,
Smile your beautiful smile,
As your dagger tears through me,
The pain in my eyes arouses you,
I'm where you want me to be.

Fill my cup with poison,
Then laugh as i crouch in pain,
Your sparkling eyes now blood shot,
From revenge so much you gain,
Torturing my love forsaken soul,
Compare me to her each chance you get,
The poison of your hatred,
Began when our eyes first met.

Place the shotgun on my temple,
My life rests in your shaken hand,
Relax don't worry sweetie,
I'll jump at each demand,
This power you behold now,
Is one drenched in sorrow,
With one soft simple push,
You could demolish my tomorrow.

Suicide they'll consider,
Homicide sounds more mature,
Manslaughter I doubt you'd pull off,
You want a bloodbath on the floor,
Make your motive now dear,
For your murdering me as we chat,
I love you forever baby.
While your hiding my body..
Remember that.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I fricking love this. im adding you to my favourites. this was one of the best poems ive ever read. love the topic youve chosen, its beautiful, the way you pulled love and torture together like that.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This is a really great poem i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow this is a reall great poem I loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Whisper

    This power you behold now,
    Is one drenched in sorrow,
    With one soft simple push,
    You could demolish my tomorrow.

    Suicide they'll consider,
    Homicide sounds more mature,
    Manslaughter I doubt you'd pull off,
    You want a bloodbath on the floor,

    bestttt part. ever.
    i told you that poets have to have a way with words because they have to pick the right one. and you have the most wonderful way with words. its amazing. i loved the whole thing.

    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by She Is My Rain

    Wow..I love this poem. It was great. You should really keep this up, you've got great talent :]

    ~XXxLostWithoutYouXxx a.k.a Cynda~