I so loved this poem its so sad, the fear of having a plane go down is scary, the fear of losing the girl of your dreams is horrible.

I just wanted to point out some errors that you made though bud, nothing big but just so you can correct it okay? you accidently put mite...it should be might, another was plain it should be plane. you accidently put loosing when it is losing. But I will give you a 5/5 for the spectacular work and thoughts you put into this amazing poem. And if you ever need anyone to talk to bud, I am here for you. I am always here for anyone but I will be all ears for you and listen to everything. Hang in there bud, You got me on your side and you got everyone else.

It obvious that you have a lot of love for your girlfriend. That's great. I'm sure she appreciates it as well.
I like your style of writing, it's like nothing I've read before. Awesome job. Keep it up. =]