Love

by xxAsHlEyXMaRiExx   Apr 10, 2008


I loved you once,
but never again,
i said forever,
you said till the end,
i never knew that it would come so fast,
now to me your just in the past.

I'll find someone new,
whose nothing like you,
that will love me forever,
and we'll stay together,
i finally feel free,
because you don't have me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxAsHlEyXMaRiExx

    Well thanks! i just write what i feel.

  • 16 years ago

    by XAlwaysXBrokenX

    WOW!! this is exactlly what i feel!! your a great writer

  • 16 years ago

    by Thomas

    I like it. Short, but straight to the point, a very good point at that. Putting someone behind you is a tough thing to do, at least for me, and I like how you put it in this poem. Very good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Damned from the Holy

    Well ashley, thats a good poem, when i can feel your sadness when you portayed your feelings on this poem it means your doin a good job. bravo, keep it up

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