Well ashley, thats a good poem, when i can feel your sadness when you portayed your feelings on this poem it means your doin a good job. bravo, keep it up

I like it. Short, but straight to the point, a very good point at that. Putting someone behind you is a tough thing to do, at least for me, and I like how you put it in this poem. Very good job.

WOW!! this is exactlly what i feel!! your a great writer

Well thanks! i just write what i feel.