Comments : Woman in love

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, so touching and emotional.
    "i don't know if i still love you
    i'm so confused
    or i just miss u
    miss being in your warm arms
    kissing your sweet lips
    smelling your skin
    this woman who fall in love with love
    love start to kill her
    i start to feel pity for her
    two stories in her life
    ruined her dream
    and killed her hopes
    but
    even all that
    she still believe in love
    coz....
    "she is woman in love"

    wonderful lines
    great job

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    That was very well written...well done!