Great one ,. i enjoy it !! can not wait till i read the next one

This is a really well-written poem.. you create such great imagery with the words you chose and it really makes the poem more interesting to read..

so many people can relate to this poem because you wrote about something so universal and so common - everyone experiences it and everyone knows what it is you are writing about...

this is no simple wall of stone
it is one of a much harder tone
it is one created within my mind
made with chains that truly bind

^^^ those are my favorite lines.. nice rhyming and nice style.. i like the way you took this topic and wrote about it in a unique way

nice job! 5/5 keep it up =)

...... I like it. I think labels are pretty stupid. When it comes down to it, we are all people with thoughts, feelings and emotions. And if someone is going to dis somebody else, they should atleast scrounge up an ounce of creativity and not label them like so many others do. Great poem though, I like it.