by RetroRavey Apr 10, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
There once was a paper I wrote, |
It is the best poem. |
Very creative piece, original and refreshing read. You managed to say so much within just five lines which is excellent. This poem has powerful message and your metaphor is truly effective. I don't like the rhyme between sadness/gladness but despite that this is well written, enjoyable read. |